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I want to be alone
But once I am
I can't stand
The solitude
I want everything to be quiet
But once it is
I can't stand
The silence
I want to live my life
But once I start
I just feel like dying
I want to be happy
But once I am
I always become sad
I want to laugh
But when I do
I feel like crying
I want to be loved
But once I am
I feel nothing but hate
I want to forget the past
But once I do
I feel ashamed
I want to be strong
But once I am
I always become weak
I don't know
What's wrong
I don't know why
I feel this way
Just please understand
I'm confused.
Sorry if this doesn't make any sense,I was...well confused at the time <_<
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Linkluver1 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Student Artist
<3
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DerplyHiggins Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Student Artist
This is amazing. Spot on!
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SlaveAslan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it makes perfect sense-spot on

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CamiDamie Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I really love the emotion put into this! And how people can relate. Awesome job!
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firelillyz Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student General Artist
I feel like this poem was based off me ;-; but its very nicely made, lets see much more! :D
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AAsGift Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This really is spot on
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siena-d Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
makes perfect sense...cause thats how i feel just about every day

i like this a lot
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Rayearth117 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Student General Artist
It makes nohing but sense.
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tanch0708 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
Confusion. It can be both inovating and a nuisance somehow, huh? : )
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chocolatevonbunny Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This makes so much sense. i know exactly what this feels like. it is very beautifully written.
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