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I want to be alone
But once I am
I can't stand
The solitude
I want everything to be quiet
But once it is
I can't stand
The silence
I want to live my life
But once I start
I just feel like dying
I want to be happy
But once I am
I always become sad
I want to laugh
But when I do
I feel like crying
I want to be loved
But once I am
I feel nothing but hate
I want to forget the past
But once I do
I feel ashamed
I want to be strong
But once I am
I always become weak
I don't know
What's wrong
I don't know why
I feel this way
Just please understand
I'm confused.
Sorry if this doesn't make any sense,I was...well confused at the time <_<
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SlaveAslan Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it makes perfect sense-spot on

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CamiDamie Apr 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I really love the emotion put into this! And how people can relate. Awesome job!
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firelillyz Nov 16, 2012  Student General Artist
I feel like this poem was based off me ;-; but its very nicely made, lets see much more! :D
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AAsGift Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This really is spot on
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makes perfect sense...cause thats how i feel just about every day

i like this a lot
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Rayearth117 Mar 15, 2012  Student General Artist
It makes nohing but sense.
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:icontanch0708:
Confusion. It can be both inovating and a nuisance somehow, huh? : )
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chocolatevonbunny Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This makes so much sense. i know exactly what this feels like. it is very beautifully written.
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Panda-Otome Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dude, that was right to the heart.
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xosamwasherexo Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is how I feel... I love this, thankyou for posting it. Glad to know we're not alone (I don't mean to sound rude by saying that)
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